3 Honest Poetic Responses to Suffering

The featured image is a book that Robin and I have read and highly recommend it to all. But honestly, I have been writing my way through grief because of Tyler’s death. What you find below are three of the poems I have written in the past couple of weeks. If you would like to follow the fullness of my writing do follow me on Facebook. You can find much more there.

Obligation

I do what I must

Touch of dust.

I reach, wanting return,

Into an empty cistern.

 

Dry well

Spiders swell.

Woven webs

Desire ebbs.

 

My core

Is no more.

Joy replaced

Tears on my face.

 

Work a drudge

Flow of sludge.

Obligation

My only motivation.

 

A smile will meet you

When I greet you.

It is a placeholder

For pain I shoulder.

 

For those who suffer

Give a buffer.

Grant space

And a little grace.

 

Set expectations aside

Stand by my side,

In silence

Quiet alliance.

 

Don’t ask, don’t tell

Your words, quell.

Let me be

But be with me.

 

  • Mark Eckel, 11 August 2022, seven weeks after the death of my son, Tyler Micah

 

Mandate

Edvard Munch

Art punch

Blood red sky

Silent the cry.

 

Solace

In silence

Sought;

But naught.

 

Early morning

No warning

Darkness descends

Starkness upends.

 

Bursts of interest,

Momentary.

Searches for rest,

Arbitrary.

 

Human

My acumen;

Unable

To label.

 

Real, not fake

For his sake

I continue

Seeking sinew.

 

Czeslaw Milosz

No gauche

The dead in living trust

So, living, speak, I must.*

 

*Czeslaw Milosz’s 1980 Nobel acceptance speech contains the truth, “Those who are alive receive a mandate from those who are silent forever.” Edvard Munch’s “Silent Scream” is an apt artistic depiction for all who have no words in their agony.

 

Loathing

Every step

A rep,

I, robot,

Caring, not.

 

Wishing passport

Chasing deport.

Every effort

To abort.

 

Caring gone

Seeking brawn

To carry on.

I, withdrawn.

 

What does it matter

If I scatter

To the wind,

My efforts thinned?

 

I’m lazy

Thoughts hazy,

Energy drained

Worship feigned.

 

Make no mistake,

I continue to ache,

Roiling tide,

Not soon to subside.

 

Having read,

Stay with my dread,

Keep up with me

Need of company.

 

Not as you suppose

With much prose.

Words abate,

Stay by the gate.

 

Soon, I hope,

To grab the rope,

To stay my fall

From this pall.

 

For me pray,

Do not say

You understand

Just with me, stand.

 

  • Mark Eckel, 31 August 2022, ten weeks after the death of my son, Tyler Micah

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